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More personal targeted drawings, not generic drawings

Working in a classroom is far different than working in the real world. Congrats!

PERFEITO ❤

I loved your doodle of the man spilling coffee

i studied graphic designs and branding was what i felt more discouraged to do. My teachers would always make us have to follow strict guidelines yet convey personality. Dont get me wrong thats the basics of design in itself, in limitations its where creativity rises, but it felt very much frustrating that design couldnt meet art for proyects like this. Design its practical, if those fun mascots serve their purpose its more than perfect, and they look so cozy and welcoming, you nailed the vibe! Its wonderful trully ✨

I'll design a baby inside of you...

Great job!!

Great drawings!

T h e f r o g 🥺

I love the one with the mascot lying in the coffee pot. <3

Just use canva

Starbucks would also fail the design class. Designers have too many rules to belittle themselves with. Do your thing and trust your instincts!!!

Interesting.

excited for part 3 !!!

Can someone link Part 2!

Its a creepy design? Lol!😮

Congratulations. Well done. Your sketches are beautiful.

SLAYY💅💅

Your doodles look childish.

ugh, stop the parts. im done. you made me look for this. you're exhausting.

Corporate logo brand nowadays is too modern & minimalist, that it lost its original meaning and uniqueness. It's understandable that the top management wanted to freshen up their logo if the company had existed for years but minimalist logo sometimes to me is a lazy design.

this is so wholesome ❤❤

im commenting to boost the vid!! i love bea!!

I can see the lack of maturity in the first logos, they were cute tho but to me it's more that they all looked depressed. I prefer something happy .

LOL paris baguette is my dad's friends resturant! Their logo is clever but definitly not "warming"

Damn their original logo was 🔥 tho

A responsible and accountable work ethic

So glad you took the feedback and learned from it. Also glad the shop owner appreciated your art enough to recognize the differences

After heading a design firm for nine years, I concur that when it comes to business identities, less is more (simple has greater impact). And, although the owner rejected your offerings, he subconsciously understands the impact of simplicity, as evidenced by his existing logo! I suggest that you approach him again and offer him what initially piqued his interest: your illustrations. Your work is clever and charming, and it would greatly enliven his stark signage: a cream-colored price board and menu, perhaps, even a line of promotional tee-shirts, etc.. As for a rebranding, might I suggest that you consider a reversed-out design on a black circle: below, a crown in your broken chalk-line illustration style, and, above, a few lines, radiating upward, to suggest the gleam of the crown. Good luck!

Bird and coffee pot

I’ll tell you what was the reason. You just did a low quality job trying to make some money. You haven’t put your soul in it like you did with those scratches. There is no meaning in your logos. This called art and work difference. Bye ❤😂🎉

Yeah, stay away from the corporate monikers. They’re bland a soulless. I probably would’ve gone a bit more literal. I like the mug as a hot tub. But I’d have gone with a crown as a the hot tub coffee mug with a handle. It being King street. Keep going with you gut instincts.

Your precious designs were lacking tbh. This is what I would expect from you if I were to ask you for a logo. It’s what you do best.

this is epic!😂😂😂

Now I’m hooked and subscribed!

Hands down the fish is awesome.

I love it

This is so cute! I love Glue Song

Thumbs up from Seoul

Love the iteration and how you totally pivoted after listening to the customer. Love all these 2nd gen designs. #6

yummyyyyy

hope you find them again or they find you soon!!

Beautiful style and work! Love it!

I would have rejected them too, but only because I’d want you to have to come back again.

BEABADOOBEE MENTIONED??!!

loveeee the designs, but what I felt was like it didn't feel professional or uk the way the earlier logo was. it was minimal and kinda spoke professional and urs looked like they were not that minimal and luxurious.

This is why I always jokingly said school sucked the creativity out of me- the projects are more to check the boxes than to develop your style and I didn't love that aspect, but still great to learn basics and concepts/rules of design.

Personally i think the professional graphic design and illustration sphere is too uptight. There is no real right or wrong, and as you said, if the client loves it, what is there to complain about? It matters little if it passes a class, i found that art schools/courses tend to bash a passionate artists capabilities into corporate consumable pieces. While that has its function too, the world does not consist of corporations. There are so many little shops, personalities, social media accounts, ngo's etc that also look for logos. Sometimes its charity events that want to have a logo to print on merch etc. Really love your attitude and your designs and thanks for giving us insights! Best of luck!

Your style is very distinctive. Based on what you just said he wanted something neutral, so he liked your artwork and work ethic, but not your style for this project. I guess this was a good learning curve to clarify this next time at the first round. 😊

“Never on the big light”taken to come to the next level😂